I think this post should be here...
this is my first song that I've been able to complete, I'm just posting the words to it because I don't have a recording of it yet. the words are a little strange to look at them without hearing the actual song, but here it is anyway tell me what you think
(each line kind of builds as it goes for this verse)
Verse 1:
What can I do to hear You, but listen
What can I do to feel You, but make myself vulnerable
What can I do to see You, but open my eyes
All You are is more than I can comprehend, but I want to try anyway (and)
All You are is more than I can handle, but I want You anyway
Chorus:
Lord, I am Yours! *You are mine*! all I am I give to You, take my life and use me as You will
With all my heart I want to please You in all I do
With all my strength I want to serve You in all I do
Verse 2:
What can I do to be like You, but try
What can I do to experience You, but enter Your courts(I might want to change that line)
All You are is beautiful, I want to tell You how beautiful You are
All You are is awesome, Oh You are awesome God! (the song goes into free worship, mabye the chorus again, I haven't really finished arranging it yet)
well that's the song tell me what you think and I'll try to make a recording of it some time....

~billy
(** is a quote from Psalm 119:57 from the NLT translation)